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I can’t remember if I heard what you said.
You talk and I wanna know if its worth my time.

One liners and angry hands.

I can’t remember if I really loved you.
You talk and I wanna know if its shit to begin with.

One liners and angry eyes.

I can’t remember if you ever looked in mine.
You talk and I don’t know what to do.

One liners and half a heart.

I can’t remember if you were ever real.
You talk and I trace the lips of reality.

Just One Liners.
©2004-2010 ~y00j
:icony00j:

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just sick of things

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:iconfrankienexus:
as with all your poetry, the wealth of emotion is in what u leave out, and how u say what u do leave in, u are subtle and brilliant at that, there is always so much going on .
this one is very bitter and sad and a little afraid, and hides behind angry words,
and then we look deeper....

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I love your comments and your textures
:icondbeast83:
stupid men...i'm sorry we're stupid...tho not all of us are bad, not too bad anyway...or rather tolerable...
great poem i felt it
:icony00j:
heh..SOME men are stupid..but most are all right. hehe. thanks for the comment :D

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i do what i do because if i didnt, how would i know who i am?

seriously.
:icondaaku-no-tenshi:
.. -Smile- Great piece. ^-^ Full of rage. X3 Love it.
- Stephen-san

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- Stephen-san
:icony00j:
heeey thanks so much. glad that rage is showin through...

:giggle:

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i do what i do because if i didnt, how would i know who i am?

seriously.

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